After showing our music video to our audience, we asked them for feedback on what worked well in the video and if anything could be improved.
POSITIVE
"Fluent narrative, worked well with the lyrics and was a clear image of a relationship"
POSITIVE
"Fluent narrative, worked well with the lyrics and was a clear image of a relationship"
"ancillary texts linked well throughout, you could cleary see it was all linked to the same artist...very professional"
"very well conformed to conventions of the RnB genre presented by other music videos"
"Great narrative and use of editing to create flashbacks"
"very realistic and relatable narrative, love the challanging of genders"
NEGATIVE
"would have been more cohessive if same font for 'Cincere's name' wasused for the song title on the ancillary texts"
" could present more of a pop genre"
"would like to see a little more of the artist singing on his own"
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